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Strengthen your story before you move into the screenplay. I’ll review your outline and/or treatment with a producer’s eye, providing detailed, actionable feedback on structure, character, stakes, pacing, story progression, and overall clarity, with clear priorities to guide your next draft.
Submission Guidelines
Submit an outline, treatment, or both, up to 15 pages total.
Please include your project title, format, genre, and logline, along with up to two specific questions or areas you’d like me to consider during the review.
Materials over 15 pages may require an additional fee.
Strengthen your story before you move into the screenplay. I’ll review your outline and/or treatment with a producer’s eye, providing detailed, actionable feedback on structure, character, stakes, pacing, story progression, and overall clarity, with clear priorities to guide your next draft.
Submission Guidelines
Submit an outline, treatment, or both, up to 15 pages total.
Please include your project title, format, genre, and logline, along with up to two specific questions or areas you’d like me to consider during the review.
Materials over 15 pages may require an additional fee.